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From scribbles to stories: Supporting writing development
by Deborah Diffily
Ms. Frasier says goodbye to the last child leaving her new
class of 5-year-olds. As she sorts the papers children have
left in the library center, she thinks back to earlier in
the day.
She had read Fox
in Sox by Dr. Seuss to the whole class and
afterward gathered four children in the library center to
discuss the story. After talking with them, she asked the
children to “write” about their favorite part
of the story.
Andy began to scribble at once. Terry drew a face with eyes
and mouth. Henry made a series of squiggles and to one side
wrote the letters “H N R Y.” Millicent looked
at the others for a moment. Then she frowned and said, “I
don’t know how.”
Ms. Frasier smiles. She knows that each child is at a different
stage in writing development. Filing the papers in the children’s
individual folders, she begins thinking of activities to
encourage each child’s writing development.
Young children,
like the ones in this example, have different beliefs about
writing. What they believe is based on their previous experiences
related to reading and writing. Some children have been read
to every night of their lives. Their reading and writing
attempts have been encouraged and supported by important
adults in their lives. These are eager writers.
Many children, like Millicent, think that writing is something
only adults do. They are convinced they cannot write and
do not want to try. Some children have never had access to
writing materials. Others have been told that their attempts
to write are “just scribble-scrabble.” These
children are reluctant writers.
Young children produce different work samples when they are
asked to write. Children with less experience in writing,
like Andy and Terry, tend to scribble or draw pictures to
represent what they want to write. Children who have had
more experience and support for their writing attempts, like
Henry, may be writing their own names and other short words
that are important to them.
Teachers can expect to see several stages of writing in a
kindergarten class. These stages are described below, with
writing samples from 5-year-old children. At each stage,
teachers can provide specific activities to encourage further
development.
Writing stages
During each stage of writing, young children are approximating
what they perceive as adult writing. Teachers need to recognize
these approximations as “real” writing and
value them.
While some writing stages will almost always be used before
others, these stages do not necessarily build upon one another.
Young children will scribble before they use developmental
spelling. They will use a single letter to represent one
word before they hear and write vowel sounds in the middle
of words.
However, not all children move systematically through the
stages explained below. Some children skip stages. Other
children may appear to regress in their writing when, in
reality, they are simply returning to a comfort zone of writing.
(This is especially true when children are worried, anxious,
or stressed.)
These stages can help teachers gain a better understanding
of children’s attempts at writing. Teachers can use
the stages as a framework for describing children’s
writing and assessing their progress over time.
Scribbling. Young children may scribble on a piece of paper.
If they believe they are writing, then it is a legitimate
phase of writing. Often children “read” what
they have just written. Teachers need to encourage this writing
behavior because it is an approximation of writing. Many
children at this stage scribble from left to right across
the page. This is a higher level than random scribbling.
Drawing. Children may also draw and “read” their
drawings as a form of communication. A child may draw an
unrecognizable form and read “I played in the home
center today with my friends.” Or a child may draw
a tree-like form and read, “This says remember to take
me to the park.”
Invented letters. Many, but not all, young children make
up their own letters. What may look like random marks to
an adult may be a child’s approximation of writing.
Writing invented letters indicates that a child has knowledge
about writing.
Random letters. As children become more aware of the alphabet,
they often begin writing letters, in long strings, repeating
particular letters. Children are most likely to repeat letters
that are in their names or other letters that are important
to them for different reasons. At this stage, there is no
relationship between the letters children write and what
they “read” as the message of the writing.
Copying words. As children become more aware of words in
their environment, they often begin copying words they see
on a regular basis. Some children copy center signs, words
posted around the classroom as labels, Word Wall words, or
charts transcribed by the teacher and hung on the classroom
walls. Children may or may not be able to read the words
that they write.
Developmental spelling. This spelling takes many forms,
but it is directly related to the sounds a child hears within
words. At the beginning of this stage, children typically
write one letter to represent one word, or perhaps one syllable.
Later, children may represent a word by the first and last
letter sounds. As children’s writing continues to mature,
they hear and write the sounds of some vowels and most consonants.
A typical progression through the stage of developmental
spelling is as follows:
One letter to represent each word (or syllable). Example: “D” for “dog.”
Initial consonant sound to represent each word
(or syllable). Example: “BB” for “baseball.”
Initial and final consonant sounds. Example: “CT” for “cat.”
Several consonant sounds per word: “TRK” for “truck.”
Some vowels. Example: “Ic Crem” for “ice
cream.”
Conventionally spelled words. Children begin to write more
fluently as they move away from sounding out each word they
write. As they become aware of how adults spell words, they
begin incorporating these words into their own writing. Each
week, more conventionally spelled words are found among the
words they write using developmental spelling.
As children become fluent with developmental spelling, teachers
use different strategies to move children into using conventionally
spelled words. Some children seem to do this naturally. Most
need extra visual support. Word Walls and personal dictionaries
help provide that support.
Supporting children’s writing
All literacy experiences are beneficial to children, but
not all children learn the same thing from the same activity.
During writing routines, children learn that writing is an
important way of communicating. As they observe their teacher
writing, they develop concepts of print. Teachers can write
children’s names as an attendance procedure or have
them sign up to work in a particular learning center. These
simple routines encourage children to write every day in
ways they see as important.
During reading routines, children begin to internalize concepts
of print that, in turn, are used in their writing. When a
teacher points out the title, author, illustrator, and capital
letters at the beginning of people’s names and at the
beginning of sentences, children eventually begin incorporating
these into their writing.
While large-group reading and writing routines enhance children’s
writing development, young writers also need individual instruction
to support their progress from one stage of writing to the
next. What teachers say and do as they work with individual
children is important.
Children need to feel their writing is valued by others.
Teachers need to balance acknowledging and supporting children’s
current writing stage with gently encouraging them to take
the next step in writing.
At every stage of writing, teachers can show that writing
is valued by encouraging a child to “read” it
to someone: “Andrea, will you read what you have written
to Billy and Anna?” The child might also read it to
another teacher, the whole class, visitors to the classroom,
or family members, for example. The teacher also shows that
writing is valued by posting writing samples from every child
in the classroom.
Tips on what to say
Under each stage of writing listed below are a few suggestions
of what adults—or older children—can say and
do to support young children’s progress in writing.
If a child is scribbling:
Involve the child in making signs for the classroom. For
example, Ms. Adams asks Darriel to watch her as she writes, “Darriel’s
Cubbie.” Then she asks him to decorate the sign and
tape the sign to his cubbie.
Encourage the child to dictate a sentence or two about
drawings. “Collette, tell me about this,” says
Ms. Adams, pointing to the child’s drawing. “I
petted the sheep at the petting zoo,” says Collette.
The teacher repeats the words one at a time and writes them,
making sure Collette is listening: “I…petted…the…sheep…at…the…petting…zoo.”
If a child is drawing:
Ask if the child wants you to label one object on a drawing.
For example, when Ignacio draws the typical grass-house-sun,
the teacher might say, “That is a beautiful sun.
You used the orange marker to make it look so hot. I wonder
if you would like me to write the word sun under your sun?” If
the child says no, the teacher respects that decision.
If the child agrees, the teacher proceeds. “Let’s
see, /s/ /s/, I need to write an ‘s’ (write ‘s’),
/u/ /u/, that is a ‘u’ (write ‘u’),
/n/ /n/, that is an ‘n’ (write ‘n’).
Now there is the word sun under your sun. Can you read
the word with me? /s/ /u/ /n/.”
Talk with the child about the difference between drawing
and writing.
Continue taking dictation from the child.
If a child is writing invented letters:
Take dictation from the child, saying the letter names
as you write the words.
Make remarks about one or two letters during each dictation
session with the child. For example, Jennifer dictates, “My
momma takes me to the store.” The teacher might comment, “Look
what you did. Your words have five m’s: /m/, my, /m/
mom /m/…/m/ ma, /m/, me. Let me see you put your lips
together like mine: /m/ /m/. Every time your lips come together
like that and you hear that /m/ sound, you know to write
an ‘m.’ Here, watch me write one more ‘m.’ I’ll
bet you can write one too. Do you want to try?”
Sing the ABC song with the child two or three times a day.
Use an alphabet book to point to the letters as the child
sings them.
Involve the child in activities that use letters of the
alphabet in a variety of forms—magnetic letters, alphabet
blocks, alphabet cards posted on the wall, alphabet books—along
with their peers.
Continue taking dictation from the child.
If a child is writing random letters:
Acknowledge the letters a child writes. For example, “Wow,
look at all those ‘T’s’. Your name starts
with a ‘T.’ So does Tony’s (another child
in the class). Let’s show all your ‘T’s’ to
Tony. Do you think that would be a good idea?”
Value the child’s random letters as true writing: “Will
you read your story to me?”
Continue taking dictation from the child.
If a child is copying words:
Acknowledge the words a child writes. For example, “You’ve
written a lot of words here. Will you read what you’ve
written to me? Where did you find this word?”
Continue taking dictation from the child.
If a child is writing using developmental spelling:
Offer support at whatever level the child is writing. For
example, if Marcie is just beginning to hear and write
letter sounds, emphasize the beginning letter sound of
each word. You might ask, “What would you like to
write today?” Marcie answers, “My dog licks
me.” You respond: “Okay, you can write, ‘My
dog licks me.’ I’ll help you sound it out:
m/m/m/m/i/, what letter makes that /m/ sound? ‘M,’ that’s
right. Okay, leave a space so we know that’s a word.
Now listen, /d/d/d/d/o/g/. What do you hear at the beginning
of /d/d/d/d/o/g/? That’s right, it’s a ‘d.’ You
are getting so good at this. Okay, leave a space and get
ready for the next word, /l/l/l/l/i/c/k/s/. That’s
right, ‘licks’ starts with an ‘l.’ Leave
a space and I’ll say the last word in your sentence,
/m/m/m/m/e/. Good, that’s it. Let’s read your
sentence together: ‘My...dog... licks...me.’ Now
will you read it to me?”
Continue taking dictation from the child.
If a child is beginning to spell words conventionally:
Point out a word the child uses often but is still spelling
phonetically. For example, Kenny writes “wuz” for “was.” Ask
Kenny to copy that word, “was,” from the Word
Wall into his personal dictionary.
Refer to a specific resource for the conventional spelling
of a word the child uses often in a piece of writing. For
example, in writing a story about a spider, Tamika consistently
writes “spidr.” Ask her to find a copy of Eric
Carle’s The Very Busy Spider, and edit her story using
the adult spelling of “spider.”
Children learn to write in stages. By knowing these stages,
teachers can describe where children are in their writing
development and offer activities to individual children that
will enhance their writing. Teachers can also use the stages
to assess a child’s progress over time and share that
progress with
parents.
Resources
Bobys, Aline R. “What does emerging literacy look like?” Young
Children 55(4): 16-20, 2000.
Holmes, Julia G. “Teachers, parents, and children as
writing role models.” Dimensions
of Early Childhood,
21(3): 12-14, 1993.
Oken-Wright, Pam. “Transition to writing: Drawing as
a scaffold for emergent writers.” Young
Children, 53(2):
76-81, 1998.
Sidelnick, Mark A. and Marti L. Svoboda. “The bridge
between drawing and writing: Hannah‘s story.” Reading
Teacher, 51(2): 174-185, 2000.
Wagstaff, Janiel M. “Word walls that work.” Instructor,
110(5): 32-34, 2001.
About the author
Deborah Diffily is an assistant professor in early childhood
education in the Center for Teacher Preparation at Southern
Methodist University in Dallas. Her primary areas of interest
are supporting emergent literacy and scientific development,
teaching young children through projects , and working
with families. |